Bittersweet Sorrow

[Aurain]

Bittersweet Sorrow
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Lost in a vision of bittersweet sorrow
I gave you my heart and soul
My heart caressed your cheek
Reaching into the depth of your being
Longing for things denied me
Sounds which will never be made
Memiors never made
Through linked but barred
A breach so wide and gaping
Worlds of different times
Had I been less of a person
I would have continued
Strengths and honor held
Forever seperated
Unrequieted words which will never be spoken

In a vision of bittersweet sorrow
I love and condemn you
Unfulfilled dreams and desires
Committed to a course of life
Linked by a thin thread
Vibrations of quivering guiles
Words of spoken now lost and forgotten
Paths changed and broken
You have touched me deeply
Fulfilled a sense of fanstasy
Yet, ours is uncommited

In a vision of bittersweet sorrow
I loved and hated you
Impossiblity in both our worlds
With logic and difference realized
I remembered you

[tsilo]

i see mixed emotions in this poem but it ends in a tragic way...

[parch]

ok
when i first read this
i pushed it off..cause i couldn't get into it
but now i reread it
and i got into it and i liked it...yeah..
and when you say, "in a vision of bittersweet sorrow" - i'm like, yeah!
so i like this and i finally found the flow in this
at least in my head - there's flow

___---parch